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Old 12-14-2007, 03:39 AM   #1
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Twinkle Twinkle
Twinkle, twinkle, little star,
I know now what you are.
Up above the world so high,
Like a hydrogen-bomb in the sky.
Twinkle, twinkle, little star,
I know exactly what you are!
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I sent my Soul through the Invisible,
Some letter of that After-life to spell:
And by and by my Soul return'd to me,
And answer'd "I Myself am Heav'n and Hell :"

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Old 01-09-2008, 11:42 PM   #2
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really, just another version of the orignal.....but it works...

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Old 01-10-2008, 03:31 AM   #3
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really, just another version of the orignal.....but it works...

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It meant as a joke
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Old 01-12-2008, 03:55 AM   #4
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To keep the original flow, might I suggest "Like an H-Bomb in the sky"?
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