ieuan

Prosaic, ordinary writing, mundane. Your poetry is not poetry it's not verse. It has no regular form, no evenly spaced stanzas, no even number of syllables. It's not iambic the only thing left is modern free form. But then it's not free verse. There is no beauty in the words that I can see, just a lot of disjointed lines.

I don't even think it is good prose, it is disjointed prose. I call it sentimetal because the factual side is poor, idiology like yours caused Europe to be enslaved to Nazi powers in WW2. Europe was enslaved because of weakness and and an absence of any will to fight for freedom. At one time it was Britain that stood alone against Japan, Germany, Italy, Rumania, Hungary and Bulgaria. When most of Europe were under the Nazi heel we in our little Island stood with the British Empire against the forces of evil. It could be argued that without our atance Europe could never have been retaken.

As well as having ideals, men and government have to have the steely will to enforce international law with force on regimes that are Satanic and evil. Without that will the former U.S.S.R. would still be heading an axis of evil in the world today. Instead American and British foreign poilicy has broken that evil empire and we are relatively free from the threat of nuclear distruction. So now we have moved onto smaller targets like the Muslim terrorists and their friendly regimes, that is reality.

Ieuan