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Old 10-28-2007, 12:23 PM   #16
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I changed the groweth and yea, although, it was read yay, as in yes.
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I changed the groweth and yea, although, it was read yay, as in yes.
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You know what, this is actually one of the best poems I've read on this message board, probably the best. And I'll explain why. The metre and the stanzas are delightful. Don't give a shit about it not being modern, it's brilliant.


Also, because it doesn't fuck around with line breaks all the time, reflects positively on the poem, not negatively.
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