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After “The Emperor’s New Clothes” (or I Love Bad Poetry attempt 2) After “The Emperor’s New Clothes” (or I Love Bad Poetry attempt 2)
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Old 10-26-2007, 01:33 PM   #1
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After “The Emperor’s New Clothes” (or I Love Bad Poetry attempt 2)
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I would love for someone to revive either of these.
http://www.writingforums.com/poetry/86847-hair-dog.html
http://www.writingforums.com/poetry/...ll-laughs.html
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Old 10-26-2007, 02:31 PM   #2
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Love the line "I knew we shouldnt have let the metaphors play in the street."

Much better than the first one!!
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Old 10-26-2007, 10:50 PM   #3
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Aah! It's getting lost in the shuffle
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http://www.writingforums.com/poetry/86847-hair-dog.html
http://www.writingforums.com/poetry/...ll-laughs.html
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Old 10-26-2007, 10:56 PM   #4
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Heh, for a second there I thought this thread was going to be "After 'the Emporer's New Groove'"... >.>

Nice poem.
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