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Old 10-23-2007, 09:41 PM   #16
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actually, when i was originally writing it, a three rhythm was flowing. i totally forgot about it when typing it out onto this site. now I think it is completely in threes, although i don't think i will make new paragraphs for every new 3.
I prefer the nero on the last line, but i don't know if that means that i should move that down with the rest or not. I don't think so at this point.
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Old 10-23-2007, 09:47 PM   #17
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Ah, it's always nice to know you've understood the author's intentions.



Hope this isn't spam or something, but where exactly in St. Louis do you live?
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Old 10-23-2007, 09:50 PM   #18
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technically i live in st. charles, which is basically st. louis, but it's 15 mins west on the highway.
half of the time i stay at my friend's apartment, which is in st. louis near tower grove park. right next to st louis university.
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Old 10-24-2007, 11:54 AM   #19
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anyone have any other suggestions? i want to be sure before i give this to other people and send it out.
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