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| Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc. |
10-18-2007, 04:40 PM
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Writer
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Merseyside, UK
Gender: Male
Posts: 31
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Stone's Monologue
Stone’s Monologue
Nobody is perfect but I stand accused,
Nobody but me obtains the power I have used,
Nobody is a match for a talent like mine,
Nobody and no-one should challenge my prime.
No-one here can match my potent,
No-one should try without magic in torrents,
No-one is here, but for me alone,
No-one here is stronger than Stone.
I can see your sweat and smell your fear,
Your mind and body if I want to can steer,
I can hurt you and kill you and swallow you whole,
You can never, ever stand against Stone.
You should be running, without turning back,
Once I start I won’t stop until your corpse is black,
I am here from far to beat you down,
And once you are dead I will seize your crown.
So surrender or die, the choice isn’t hard,
But feel assured that I am not just a bard,
My rhymes, they bring with them truth and fear,
And pain about which I will not shed a tear.
So make your choice, I don’t have all night,
Tell me; will you surrender or will you fight?
The latter will bring pain to the bone,
There is nothing alive that can challenge the Stone.
Critique is welcome 
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10-20-2007, 10:45 AM
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Writer
Join Date: Oct 2007
Location: Merseyside, UK
Gender: Male
Posts: 31
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10-20-2007, 12:09 PM
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Wordsmith
Join Date: May 2007
Location: On course
Gender: Male
Posts: 6,917
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