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Old 10-15-2007, 03:39 PM   #1
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A few thoughts...

God sent a pretty big dog down to slay you.
It did not bite or bark, but meowed.
The cat smiled when the dog meowed.
The cat found it funny
because usually it's the cat that meows and he is a dog.
Which bark.
Later in the day we walked through a corn field.
There were a few birds there.
Birds usually land in corn fields, somewhere.
It's good that they can do this because there isn't many other places on Earth for them to rest in the day time.
Busy cities, and rustling towns scare them away.
In the evening we find an owl.
Owl's growl.





Had to post this one, it's been in my mindscape for a few eve's!
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Old 10-15-2007, 03:42 PM   #2
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Doesn't seem to be any room for boredom in your mindscape.
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Don't ask me why, and maybe other people will like it too, but - I thought this was great. I think because it's really straight forward...but so so wrong.
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