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Old 10-04-2007, 03:33 PM   #1
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Distraction

I woke up for you today,
alarm clock sounding the finale
of a dream, then brushed
my thoughts in your direction.
I scratched the sleep-sand
from my eyes for you, while unheard
music steamed in the shower

Monday morning you look
so fine...


For you I arranged the refrigerator
letters to spell sunshine
before I hurried into autumn,
coat pulled tightly around umbrella.
I picked up a dime for you,
the one I saw last week
frowning on the museum steps.

In the evening I bought a curbside
rose for you, and the scent
fell upon my clothes. When I saw you
standing near the clock
I knew
for you I would fall asleep.
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Old 10-04-2007, 05:17 PM   #2
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This was good. Appropriately melancholy.
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Old 10-04-2007, 05:45 PM   #3
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It was very beautiful, it told how it's like to be in love, always distracted..
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Old 10-04-2007, 05:59 PM   #4
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Hmm. sounds like the epilogue of one of those storiesn where the girl dies. Which in this context is supposed to be a compliment.
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Old 05-29-2008, 10:59 AM   #5
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So sweet.
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