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Old 09-30-2007, 06:02 PM   #1
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Fat Thin and In-Between

Fat thin and in-between

Come in said Mr. Fat
By Gum you’re looking lean
I’ve just put the kettle on
For something in between
Don’t mind if I do say’s Thin
Its ages since I ate
I have such an appetite
Some chocolate would be great
Said Mr. Fat I’ve none of that
Not something that I store
I have been told it makes you fat
Don’t use it any more

Oh dear say’s thin
That’s not much fun
Then never mind
I’ll have that bun
A cup of tea says Mr. Fat
No … coffee please says Thin
Made with milk and honey
Then a little sugar in….
You never change shouts Mr. Fat
Why can’t I be like you?
Life’s never fair for fatties
We get hungry too
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Old 09-30-2007, 06:04 PM   #2
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LOL This was fun. True story too.
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Old 09-30-2007, 06:11 PM   #3
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Enjoyed this, although I seem to recall reading something very similar.
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Old 09-30-2007, 07:04 PM   #4
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Thanks Eiji

It was meant to be fun I was just doodling

Hi Baron

Slim chance of writng anything about fat people that is original....

I copied it from Pip Talk.... to Lit.org then over to here...

Of course I wrote it first .... just wanted to see how it would be taken on each site.

I never steal work... have no need to ... so any similarity is pretty much a coincidence.... Dont all Chinese people look the same too?

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Dont all Chinese people look the same too?
OMG LOL. Don't forget the bad driving. But on a good note, don't forget the great food.
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Thanks Eiji

It was meant to be fun I was just doodling

Hi Baron

Slim chance of writng anything about fat people that is original....

I copied it from Pip Talk.... to Lit.org then over to here...

Of course I wrote it first .... just wanted to see how it would be taken on each site.

I never steal work... have no need to ... so any similarity is pretty much a coincidence.... Dont all Chinese people look the same too?

Eric
Wasn't trying to accuse you of plagiarism, that's the unforgivable sin around here. I do remember what this reminded me of now though, it was a children's nursery rhyme.
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