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Old 09-30-2007, 12:59 PM   #1
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Spider And The F*cking Log
Turn that wand down,
Ya magic ain't workin' today.
Scaring off the bats,
Scaring off the bats.
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Old 09-30-2007, 01:15 PM   #2
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Old 09-30-2007, 02:00 PM   #3
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Old 09-30-2007, 03:11 PM   #4
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Where's the spider... and the log for that matter?
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This is so pointless, even the Baron wouldn't have posted it. Try harder!
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Old 09-30-2007, 07:39 PM   #6
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I don't like this. I can imagine this on a sketch-show, the sketch being of poets. Talking the *iss of the ambiguity.
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Old 09-30-2007, 08:48 PM   #7
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I don't think you intended for the reader to laugh. I just couldn't help it though.

The last two lines could be useful in something more developed.
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I don't think you intended for the reader to laugh. I just couldn't help it though.

The last two lines could be useful in something more developed.
You're wrong, he absolutely did intend the reader to laugh
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