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Old 09-30-2007, 11:00 AM   #1
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I told myself...

I told myself…

I told myself I would never fall in love
I told myself that stuff I was above
I told myself relationships didn’t last
I told myself it would be over fast

I told myself not to care too much
I told myself I would resent your touch
I told myself that you would walk away
I told myself things would end up gray

I told myself it would all end blue
I told myself it couldn’t be true
I told myself you didn’t care
I told myself life wasn’t fair

But life is fair
You do care
All of this is true
And I’m not blue

Things aren’t gray
You didn’t walk away
I love your touch
and I care too much

Things weren’t over fast
The relationship did last
That stuff I am not above
I think I’m falling in love
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Old 09-30-2007, 02:06 PM   #2
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So you told yourself a pack of lies....... If you cant trust yourself who can you trust ?
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Old 09-30-2007, 02:33 PM   #3
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So you told yourself a pack of lies....... If you cant trust yourself who can you trust ?
It about self-doubt and how when walking into a relationship you tell yourself it wont work. I mean, do you go out on a first date and say "Im gonna marry this persons someday.
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Old 09-30-2007, 05:57 PM   #4
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Wrong

Life is all about self confidence

Doubt just chains you down

If you go round telling yourself you cant then you most probably wont.....

Eric
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Old 09-30-2007, 06:25 PM   #5
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Well, Im sorry that everyone is not as confident as you, but over-confidence is a bad thing(just to let ya know, lol). I dont want to get in a "fight" or anything, its just a poem.
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