Fairplay

If we only could know
What tomorrow had in store
Would we be up and queuing
For more and more and more?
Tomorrow will be yesterday
It’s just a point in Time
No time then for regression
Hope you’re doing fine

Baron

Short, sweet and makes a point.

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Eiji Tunsinagi

I enjoyed this (don't get me wrong) but does each line have to be capitalized at the start? I used to do this and then I started to notice --- it can be kind of annoying sometimes. But it's your poem --- so never mind. I liked it nonetheless.

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"nothing is perfect, nothing lasts, and nothing is finished."

"how will you go about finding that thing the nature of which is totally unknown to you?"

Ilasir Maroa

Sorry, not feeling this. It seems a little shallow to me. It's okay up 'til the last two lines, which I feel weaken the meaning considerably.

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My hopeful book:
Crap! Haven't posted it anywhere yet, darn!
"Only tyranny cloaks itself in shadows. The light of justice can not be hidden."

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