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| Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc. |
09-04-2007, 05:29 PM
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Drinks with the Bard
I once danced with dragons,
dragged from cave into wooden castle knights
of pogue,
pleasure and reverie - they robbed me.
The woman I once was,
soldered her talent
with smut into triumph.
I've since lost her number,
as she was common
and fond of the drink.
Last edited by ms. vodka : 09-04-2007 at 05:39 PM.
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09-04-2007, 05:52 PM
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a bit of dark humour here which I richly enjoyed. It held the era of dragons quite well with the language, a few lines I especially liked
actualy i was going to list them, but discovered the whole poem was there.
Thanks for the post
TL
fond of the drink, lol great
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09-04-2007, 05:54 PM
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You like poetry or you like secks?
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09-04-2007, 06:25 PM
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Well poetry in this piece, to clarify I suppose.
TL
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09-04-2007, 06:31 PM
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thank you.
i also like poetry.
more so than sex, really.
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09-04-2007, 07:00 PM
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lol...
Nice piece btw.
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09-04-2007, 07:17 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by ms. vodka
i also like poetry.
more so than sex, really.
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Poetry is sex with words.
This poem is sex in words. Thanks for posting it. 
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09-05-2007, 12:42 AM
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i must admit i've missed your poetry, Ms. Vodka.
i've been away for quite some time, but upon my return i'm more than happy to see you still posting.
as for this poem, it reminds me of a dream i had, very much so in fact.
anyway, this was a nice read and put a smile on my face
oh, and by the by......to me sex=poetry=sex and so on and so on. one begets the other. hence all these poems i've been posting about it lately.
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09-05-2007, 11:26 AM
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thanks all.
this poem was actually written with a friend of mine, a new member at LM who i've gotten to know pretty well recently.
he goes by the name Voodoo.
i actually find him rather sweet.
excellent writer, too.
i appreciate the comments, and i'm sure so will he.
jen
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09-05-2007, 11:52 AM
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Hmmm. Smirnoff on ice?
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09-05-2007, 12:25 PM
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This poem was almost sex good. Quite hugely a fun entertaining thing. Props.
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09-05-2007, 01:03 PM
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thought sex provoking sex and fun like sex to read sex
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09-05-2007, 02:18 PM
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Originally Posted by ms. vodka
I once danced with dragons,
dragged from cave into wooden castle knights
of pogue,
pleasure and reverie - they robbed me.
The woman I once was,
soldered her talent
with smut into triumph.
I've since lost her number,
as she was common
and fond of the drink.
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sex? ... 
or surviving violence dressed as gender prerogative
pretending to be sex? ...
Quote:
Originally Posted by ms. vodka
thank you.
i also like poetry.
more so than sex, really.
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I read somewhere that
if sex is a pain in the ass, you're doing it wrong ...
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09-06-2007, 12:04 PM
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thanks guys.
and thanks from Voodoo, with a capital V.
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09-06-2007, 12:22 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by ms. vodka
thank you.
i also like poetry.
more so than sex, really.
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how about writing poetry while having sex?
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