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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 09-03-2007, 10:29 PM   #1
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I said...

You see if this were but done
then you would know the battle was won
but you lose and never ever see
that is not why I follow a tree
if the place is there for you find
then go away this place is blind

magic dreams thought and fear
I really really wish you were here
I'll make this long
not an insane song

what do you want me to say
to tell the secret I hold everyday
that is my curse and that is my crown
when rhymes rhyme you will surely drown
is this poem getting to long maybe you begin to hear my song...

You want me to comment I truly would
but the curse you see is what I should...

I remember the place not far far away
I return there night and day

work on my poems as I might
inspire one fucking hopeful light

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Old 09-04-2007, 07:40 AM   #2
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biggles is an unknown quantity at this point
"I'll make this long
not an insane song"

but it is insanely long
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