Grim

I’m waiting for my kid to get up, and I felt inspired by all the pretty love poetry.
(If you genuinely think this is good, please look up 'satire' and get back with me.)

Oh baby, my sweet angle
How could u leave me? I’ve wrote you this rhyme
I thought u were special
But now uv broken my H3artz0rZ for ever until the end of time.

This last week has been the best week of my life
Even though my ‘rents have been harshing on me major
You make my agony go away,
Cause its your flavor that I savor.

Is this because I told my boyz we did it?
Cause OMFG that’s a lie.
Sure, youv got a great rack,
but I respect you for you’re mind.

I’m gonna give u a call,
Gotta scratch that itch.
What??? You hookin’ up with joey?

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Pale Gallery

I prefer The Eternal Sunshine Of The Spotless Mind

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"In the end it is impossible not to become what others think you are." - Julius Caesar

Baron

A protest?

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Grim

You're a sharp lad, Baron. I'd smile, if I weren't against emoticons.

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Eiji Tunsinagi

I liked this. And I liked the spoiler. And I like the links to yr other poems in the sig. I think I'll do that with my own. It was all quite nice.

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"nothing is perfect, nothing lasts, and nothing is finished."

"how will you go about finding that thing the nature of which is totally unknown to you?"

Lady Fire

Amusing I chuckled. Given the usual expanse of "words" in your other poems I'm sensing it might be a refreshing change.