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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 08-16-2007, 01:39 AM   #1
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Immortal is on a distinguished road
Color Me Unsatisfied

An insatiable desire
seems to fit my name
far more better than
any other thing.
It seems to me that
I can never have
my way.

I wish I was there
where my friends were hangin',
but life isn't allowed
to play favorites, and
it doesn't seem fair,
but I can't let it get to me.

It seems I've never had a chance
to say my piece
before whirlwinds come.
My words they seize.
I never asked for much.
I figured that's the way
it ought to be.

But, now I feel like I deserve a little more
than what life has thrown at my door.

I just wanted to be satisfied
and feel like I worth something
to someone's life.
Maybe I'm just selfish
or maybe it's greed,
but the desire in me
needs to feed.
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Old 08-16-2007, 01:52 AM   #2
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biggles is an unknown quantity at this point
I am worth something
in someone's life- surely?

Don't skirt around the subject, get to the point
and you'll be far happier with your poem.
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