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08-12-2007, 09:46 PM
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Niamh
The spider cunt is in me Niamh.
Niamh! Pass me the bucket.
I was honestly bathed in the sink when I was a child.
Is this normal? I mean It's really weird.
Sometimes I think I was brought up in the 50's.
So many of my memories seem of that age.
In all honesty Niamh.
Niamh! Where is the salamander?
In your hair?
Stab it with the pillow.
Niamh, am I annoying yet?
I hope I'm not Niamh.
Where is the photo of me.
In the bath?
That's ironic Niamh.
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08-12-2007, 10:04 PM
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I love Pale Gallery!
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08-12-2007, 10:07 PM
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lol hilarous. I enjoyed the dialogue, back and forth.
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08-12-2007, 10:13 PM
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Niamh is an Irish girls name if any of you cats were wondering.
Pronounced (Neeve)
Off to bed I go.
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08-12-2007, 10:14 PM
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Off to bed I go.
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Thats a good idea. See ya.
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08-12-2007, 10:15 PM
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Oh! And I was bathed in a sink once as a child. Weird how I remember it, because to fit in the sink I would of had to of been like a few months old or something.
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Last edited by Pale Gallery : 08-12-2007 at 10:18 PM.
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08-12-2007, 10:18 PM
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Quote:
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Oh! And I was bathed in a sink once as a child. Weird how I remember it, because to fit in the sink I would of had to be like a few months old or something.
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Depends on how big the sink was.
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08-13-2007, 03:24 AM
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I got the feeling that this was being different for the sake of being different, and as such it left me cold.
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08-13-2007, 04:56 AM
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honestly you were bathed in a bucket? Did you expect to have a shower?
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08-13-2007, 07:09 AM
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Its cold because it was brought out of my inner psyche.
And to be honest my mind isn't well. lol
It is a bit ridiculous though, you're right.
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10-22-2007, 06:17 PM
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Remember, remember.
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10-22-2007, 06:20 PM
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Sorry, not one of your best (IMO). I thought it had some interesting forms, but the images weren't very interesting to me, sorry.
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