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I have a thought. Sometimes you rewrite things and they comke out very differently. But that doesn't mean the original was bad. I have noticed that with somke writers. The best example I can think of at the moment, is the original version of Frank Herbert's "Dune" which was published later, and even though it was different, was a good story unto itself. YOu might try an approach like that with this poem. Keep the old one up, but also post the new one.
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Crap! Haven't posted it anywhere yet, darn!
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