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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 07-28-2007, 11:17 PM   #1
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Old 07-29-2007, 08:51 AM   #2
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Great imagery to get your idea across. I like how the opening speaks about how time is not what moves the hands of the clock and the end speaks about how time does not pre-determine your fate; you are also not moved by time (at least that's my take on it). The parts about the past say to me that things already done cannot be undone, and that they don't dictate what is to come.

The message I got from this is that you have some control over your future - regardless of your past. Maybe I'm reading something into this that's not there but I love that message, and that's what I got from this.

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