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| Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc. |
07-28-2007, 05:23 PM
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kcab kool I nehW
saw ecno tahw ot
dnif regnol on I
ssalg gnikool eht ni egami ruoy
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07-28-2007, 05:28 PM
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All I see is a schoolboy's game
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07-28-2007, 06:12 PM
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07-29-2007, 10:29 AM
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looks good when you hold it up to a mirror!
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07-29-2007, 03:39 PM
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This is quite interesting. Not long, which is good because my eyes hurt already, but something a bit different. Post-translation, though, it isn't much of a poem. It wouldn't work on someone who reads hebrew, for example.
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07-29-2007, 06:49 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by BlackWolf
This is quite interesting. Not long, which is good because my eyes hurt already, but something a bit different. Post-translation, though, it isn't much of a poem. It wouldn't work on someone who reads hebrew, for example.
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I quite understand, hence its brevity. 
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07-29-2007, 07:12 PM
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No gimmick turns a peice of nonsense into poetry unless it happens to be nonsense poetry and this lacks the wit to be that.
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07-29-2007, 07:37 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Baron
No gimmick turns a peice of nonsense into poetry unless it happens to be nonsense poetry and this lacks the wit to be that.
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Dear Baron, We got that loud and clear on your first post, now start being constructive if you have anything constructive to suggest. Thanks 
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07-29-2007, 07:43 PM
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The only constructive comment that I could make is that you replace the original post with a piece of poetry
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