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| Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc. |
07-27-2007, 04:42 AM
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Well, I didn't get the Jewel aspect....and Emeralds, Diamonds and Rubies are Gemstones not Jewels....Opal is in a different category to the other three so you should have kept consistency and chose a more suitable rock.
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07-29-2007, 08:41 PM
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Ah, I see what you mean about the opal. I'll make the changes. Thanks for pointing those things out to me.
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07-29-2007, 08:56 PM
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Good poem. I think that Triq's being a little too pedantic.
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07-29-2007, 09:28 PM
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Thanks, Baron. Yeah ... if I can't replace opal with something else that makes sense, I won't change it.
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07-30-2007, 04:03 AM
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Sapphire, Emerald, Ruby and Diamond are in the same category. Maybe Sapphire could be replaced as it could represent rain NB: I wrote poems on all 4..
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