writersblock

Hi, this is my first post. Constructive cristism required.



I know I’ve been a fool
I know I’ve been a liar

I know I’ve been a thief
I know I’ve hurt you
I have changed.

I have a good job
Money and happiness
Well,
Hopefully

I need you here in my life
I need your touch
I need your love.

Please come back to me
I hope you have forgiven me
For all the things that have
Been said and done.

I hope we have put the past
To one side
Where it belongs and moved on

Have you moved on?

I know you are going through
some stuff at the moment
And I hope I can help you
through it like a friend

Do you want me?

Broken goods or second hand?

What are you thinking?

Please tell me.

I want you back
Can’t you see that?
I’m not desperate
I want to get to know you again.
I want to wake up beside you
I want you inside me
Making love to me
Every day,
I think of you often

I’m still in love with you
My life was with you once
But now in a dark place
Where I don’t want to be
I need your touch
Your body near me
Touching intimately
In places where you know to go

I thought you wanted me
I’m not so sure now
Giving wrong signals which
Make me confused
Angry
Hurt all over again

I have feelings of hating
Myself,
In my world
Is not the way to go
As I could hurt myself even more
Going to the extreme of my
Depression
My dark world
I don’t want to go.

Please save me from that world

Of destruction and self explosion
Please save me from the world
Of dark thoughts of ending a life.


This may appear as a warning,
A threat

It is not

It is what I’m feeling.

Sync

aww, I imagine a few have us been here, or are there or will be there.
Heart break well spoken. I always find it hard to critique personnal pieces like this, just because even with words spoken with passion, they always always always fall short, like colouring in charcoal when you need to paint in oils.

I enjoyed this, a well described pain, sure its been done, but it doesn't take away the pain written

Sync