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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 04-28-2007, 01:37 PM   #1
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We Creat Our Own Heaven

Walking barefoot on a freshly-cut lawn,
The startling newness of a baby just born,
Watching the sunrise on a hot summers day,
Never running out of things to say

Perhaps it's true that in this life,
There's a small taste of the Heaven that we will deserve,
And at the end of this- everlasting bliss,
We create our own Heaven while still living on Earth.

The soft up and down of an undulating sea,
A secret shared between you and me,
Running without a care, in an empty space,
Allowing a smile to linger on your face

In life, such a contrast of joy and sorrow,
Until one day there will be no tomorrow
Just endless mirth- a kind of rebirth
We create our own Heaven while still living on Earth.
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Old 04-28-2007, 03:52 PM   #2
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Excellent rhyming scheme, all I have to say. Nice poem.
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Old 04-28-2007, 10:33 PM   #3
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Conversely, we can also create our own hell here on Earth. A thought provoking read.
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