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Old 04-28-2007, 12:12 PM   #1
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Haiku Hiya
versatile will bite
on ass hard when taken off
figurative leesh

the haiku hop-scotch
delightful forms adorning
my lovely soul-sounds

poetry section
of writing forums website?
seriously cool!

heart sutras sewn up
by a subservient mind:
the proper technique
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Old 04-29-2007, 07:09 PM   #2
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haiku or senryu, I enjoyed them though

the first one a bit forced but I had a laugh at the others, pleasantly so.

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You are right about that first stanza, it was forced.

Glad you enjoyed the rest.

Senryu?
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Old 04-30-2007, 06:52 AM   #4
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Oh well Haiku, or just how I was lead to believe consist around the subject of nature where senryu around the foibles and humour. Of course interputations are individuals in themselves. Either or I enjoyed them.

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Interpretation is an individual itself?

Quite beautiful.
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haiku adroitness
requires a nimble mind like
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nicely done, sir.
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Old 04-30-2007, 05:39 PM   #7
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what's-the-haps-haiku, my man
with improved vocab!

adroit is the word
that best describes my style
pleasure crossing paths!

I am always here
if ever adroit poets
are in high demand

remember the name
Alexander Crane, poet
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