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If I Had Any Sense At All If I Had Any Sense At All
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Old 04-21-2007, 04:32 PM   #1
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If I Had Any Sense At All
If I had any sense at all I’d turn and say something so gut-wrenchingly fantastic

You’d grin with your arms outstretched
Crooked elbows and hands crucified over a Cartesian X-Y axis,
So expectant self assured,
And break into the wild
Happy happy happy dance.
We’d align into functions that turn and break, going nowhere,
To oscillate and shoot off into infinite space.

If I had any sense I’d say
We’ve got no limits.
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Old 04-22-2007, 06:47 PM   #2
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ahhh the infinite....

enjoyed this clever write.
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