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i totally know what you mean and agree with you that all poetry is art. no one should have to have their poetry critiqued on a poetry critique forum. i mean you had the guts to put it here for everyone to see and then someone has to go and make suggestions on how you can improve it which is like totally rude. i don't know maybe some people don't understand basic etiquette or something. keep writing cuz you're obviously happy with how you're doing things. not everyone can be sylvia plath right?
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