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Old 04-07-2007, 06:08 PM   #1
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We can't deny
the person we are
we can lie about it
sprint blindly away, pray
endlessly or succumb

In the end
all that matters
is the depth of your soul, the
band-aids placed within
redemption songs quietly unsung, and

A lover who won't drive you crazy, ironic
as thoughts come from this bottle of wine
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Old 04-07-2007, 06:47 PM   #2
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Nice, short, simple, it conveyed the idea well. I really liked this. Not bad at all.
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