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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 03-29-2007, 10:51 AM   #1
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Luck

Like a roulette ball,
round and round we go –
determined
by where we fall.

A few, though,
like a dice
dancing
from edge
to edge,
go their own way,
and know
it makes little difference
where they land –
it’s
which side
of
themselves
they get
to show.

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Old 03-29-2007, 02:29 PM   #2
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Interesting visual. Although with dice its more which side they hide. Five sides show, I get that its the side thats up.
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