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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 03-25-2007, 01:05 AM   #1
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Using the comma

It's like climbing a mountain.

You must take many, many
little stops along the way, taking time
to rest,
to catch your breath,
so that when you start climbing again,
you will have all the energy you need,
even though it feels sometimes
like you'll never make it
to
....the
.........top.



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Cute and the title fits. It is so true too. Learning to use comma's is like climbing a mountain. Love the end.
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