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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 03-12-2007, 11:23 PM   #1
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Ive corrected the grammor in this one, im still horrible at spelling. Although with all things in life a spell checker solves all things.


Also im using the same type of formula, wish is getting boring is there a good site witch teaches u different techniques. I could google it, but i would like one other people have recommended?






Hope dissolved for fear derives
From the misguided fools
Clawing the mind, from behind,
Through safety of numbers, drives them to murder
The fear turns to visual hatred
Disguised by a numb face,
Frozen in a time of suffering,


See the tree's, so free?



Through the window


Distant, avoided, alone and free,


As the chain cresses the neck,
Ties you closer towards the sun,
The beauty entices your mind,
Giving pleasure never thought possible,


Remember the trees'', so free?


Through the window


Distant, cold and beautiful and free


While reality takes place,
Fantasy explodes,
Music deepens,
Art cries,
The mind soars
Closer to oblivion
With every care on its leech
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