laurelin

Failure is a blessing in disguise,
To fail at that which you hate is actually rather wise.
To try at that which you love will sustain you all your life.
You can suffer the lows, as long as they last, to ride the blissful highs.

Immortal

Take out "that" from the 2nd and 3rd line and it will sound smoother.
Also, I kinda really didn't notice the rhyme until I read it a couple of times because the lines are sooo long. Kinda takes the rhyme away.

Good message, good flow (except for that one part..haha...pun). Kudos!!
Keep poemin'!

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