Will We Win? - Page 2 - Writers Forum

citygirl · 02-12-2008, 09:08 AM

Thank you crowley.

citygirl · 02-13-2008, 12:00 AM

Crowley, thanks.........you are an...Encourager; A quality that some have not obtained.

dannyboy · 02-13-2008, 01:26 AM

oh God here we go again.

Let Crowley encourage all he wants, I fear such encouragement may lead you to think this works as a poem. It doesn't. That's okay - as you've said yourself, you've just begun. It shows.

It always shows. For all of us. Its a fucking long road.

Crowley · 02-13-2008, 04:27 AM

I agree with you, it is a fucking long road. Therefore it makes sense to review someone at the start of said road as if they were at the start. Your opinion is that this has no worth and your entitled to that but I'm going to look at it as a poem by someone who's still thinking about where to go. If we all compared our stuff to the standards of Baron, Mister Jack or even yourself we may as well give up now.

dannyboy · 02-13-2008, 04:43 AM

I review all equally - they then take what they wish, dismiss the rest (or all of it) - to take offense simply shows their lack, for me to worry about their lack is ego and adds far to much weight to my words. They are, after all, simply an opinion.