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| Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc. |
11-27-2006, 11:20 AM
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.................................................. .................................................. .......................................... oh crud............................
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11-27-2006, 11:17 PM
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...ug...
A word of warning to all who dare
who imbide in Caffine without a care
though I admit I take what I can get
there is always, ALWAYS a regret
staying up till well after three
makes it impossbible to get up early
and caffine dehydrates, so when you do wake
you are guarenteed a great headach
and true, you may write more freely if in a funk
but in the end, most of its junk
so I'll say this to end it, This poem is over
YOU CAN INDEED GET A CAFFEINE HANGOVER!
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11-27-2006, 11:35 PM
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Hah... quite amusing ditties, here. The rhythm and syllable emphasis need a bit of work but it was great to read.
I love the thread's title as well; that's what pulled me in to this thread.
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11-27-2006, 11:42 PM
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yesssss!!! finally some critical advice! thank you so much!
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12-01-2006, 12:12 AM
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Two for one!!
I am tired and overworked
This assignment I want to shirk
Alas if I indeed do that
The marks I need I'll surly lack
So I will have some nice coffee
stay up and work untill it's three
When I am bored I'll write some stuff
And pass my exam on my luck
Tell me if it's true
an end is overdue
should I stop this trend
as I seem to tend
Is it dull to you
I am often up
Till three in the 'morn
and coffee I drink
'Till there is no more
Should I end the rhyme
and do something new
Please just let me know
it is up to you
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12-01-2006, 09:27 PM
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These continue to amuse me. You know, you could send these to some magazine and have em published, or something.
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12-01-2006, 10:52 PM
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Cute all of them. But, for your sake, stay off the caffiene except in the mornings and keep good notes to study before exams. LOL
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12-01-2006, 11:59 PM
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... you really think they are good enough to be published?
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12-14-2006, 05:18 PM
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Final
now it is over
one last poem I write
and I really feel
I lost the fight
I could do better
I know it is true
i found this out
nothing I could do
I worked all I could
and i got miminal marks
I wonder if I
can really handle
this lark
I feel down
I feel a failure
I'll write to keep strong
' cut it really feels
that is all
I have going on.
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12-14-2006, 08:49 PM
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Another good one! The ryhming seems a little off to me, but that can be easily fixed.
And sure, I'd read em if they were published! Just not, like, all together. Since they all pretty much cover the same topic, it would get dull reading through them all at once. But maybe, some willing magazine or newspaper could give you a little spot for a monthly/weekly poem thing.
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09-11-2008, 09:29 PM
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Greetings!
I am indeed unsure if I should write any more of this. It feels finished, and no poin in dragging it out, eh? It's been a while since I've written anything here, and I must admit that I am a little surprised at these poems. I am glad the internet has perserved them so much better then I would have on my own power.
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