"Why Don't You Ever Write About Me?" - Page 2 - Writers Forum

09-06-2006, 10:47 AM

wyndy: no one can ever put it quite like you can. you have my love.

syren: chip and dale?

jen

gigi · 09-06-2006, 01:52 PM

Swing low sweet cherry
Make it awful
Its your life, its your party, its so awful
Lets start a fire
Lets have riot! yeah its awful
It was punk
Yeah, it was perfect now its awful

They know how to break all the girls like you
And they rob the souls of the girls like you

Swing low, cherry, cherry
Yeah its awful
Hes drunk, he tastes
Like candy, hes so beautiful
Hes so deep like dirty water
God, hes awful
Youre lost, oh, wheres your daddy - its so awful

And they royalty rate all the girls like you
And they sell it out to the girls like you
To incorporate little girls

Hey, run away with the light
Run away its divine
Lets run away, yeah, tonight and
Well steal the light of the world

Swing low, sweet cherry, yeah, its awful
Youre ripe for the picking, its so awful
Youve got your youth
Dont waste your money
Yeah its awful
I was punk!
Now Im just stupid!
Im so awful

Oh, just shut up youre only 16

If the world is so wrong
Yeah you can break them all
With one song
If the world is so wrong yeah you can take it all
With one song

Swing low sweet cherry
Make it awful
They bought it all, just build a new one,
Make it beautiful...yeah

ps:

Calling someone "emotionally exhausting" is just cruel.

09-06-2006, 08:58 PM

yay.

let the courtney love/vodka comparisons start rolling in...

Glfralin · 09-06-2006, 10:06 PM

It is obvious to me with your poem Ms. V. that this person has caused a great deal of pain, but not all of the pain. I think this is a great way for you to release. Did I ever tell you that I'm bipolar. It's kind of a nusance at times, but the most pain is caused by people that stigmatize the person as the disease and compare it to their stupid ideas of it. And of course there are those who call it a woman thing, however; I've known men who are bipolar who are far worse cases. I have no idea what truely causes your pain, but I can certainly understand what you say about people thinking that it serves us a purpose or we'd get away from it. Some things cannot be run away from.

Oh but for those wonderful highs. lol

strangedaze · 09-06-2006, 10:51 PM

okay, ill sit here and look pretty. and admit to the fact that id let courtney have her way with me.

09-07-2006, 12:04 PM

thanks glfralin. i always appreciate. and yes, i think i'm bi-polar... but i long ago gave up on doctors.

drew, man, you need to be more careful about who you let draw water from your pump. someday you're going to wake up and find that thing all rusted out and then before you know it something will fall off of it.

vodka

circulatesun · 09-08-2006, 10:01 PM

Bravo. Short on time these days. But this caught my attention in between yelling at waiters.
Kisses
And once again Bravo

103_smalls · 09-11-2006, 08:50 PM

daaaaaaaaaaaaaamn girl!

Awesome. One of your better poems... which basically makes it Jesus considering that everything you write is amazing.

silverwriter · 09-12-2006, 01:39 AM

forgive me, but "he says" - he asks

"I could write an entire
novel in a weekend." - i want to slap people who say that to me.

my answer to the question, should you care - both. a tipping of the scales to the latter on my part.

excellent. just excellent. one of my favorites, if not my favorite, by far.

much, much love,

jaime

09-12-2006, 10:38 AM

ergh.

i don't want to kick this up again... but i do want to say thank you j. luis, smalls and silver.

so, thank you.

catch 22.

WisdomSeeker · 09-12-2006, 12:48 PM

I think I've been in your shoes...or seat...and my husband's been in that doorway. Funny how if it's not one thing to occupy the mind it's another (...got my own "addictive all-consuming, creative brain matter focused exclusively on metal chards and twisted wire (come-to-life!) all connected deep somewhere within that beckoning flat screen panel" problem).

Hahaha! Enjoyed your write...
~Kim~