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05-07-2006, 05:50 PM
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Best Seller
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fragment.
the six pack.
This afternoon I walked
the short distance
to the corner market and back.
The sun was so warm. I felt like a child.
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05-07-2006, 06:27 PM
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Nice one, socks! I can imagine the rubber flip-flops. I can also remember when the asphalt was too hot to walk barefoot on mid-summer. Back then it was six pieces of gum!
gG
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05-08-2006, 01:16 AM
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dear g,
thanks. i hope you are doing okay. i've been reading your posts. i liked your short story.
as always,
gym.
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05-08-2006, 10:15 AM
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pretty good, pretty good...a nice glimpse
thanks for sharing
-andy
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purple junk diluted iguana infested snarkleberries hungry traveller
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05-08-2006, 10:21 AM
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Not enough...
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05-08-2006, 12:37 PM
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I agree with the frumpy looking penguin.
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05-08-2006, 12:50 PM
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He's emo.
Fanart by Fina! |
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05-08-2006, 04:56 PM
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"Now that is the shizzle that we love."
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05-08-2006, 09:32 PM
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emo eh? my son just explained it to me. learn something every day. sigh
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