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Old 02-22-2006, 07:09 PM   #1
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black, string hair hides

black, stringy hair hides
sunken eyes intent on prize
hopes identified
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Old 02-22-2006, 08:01 PM   #2
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hmmm. Seems like we interpreted this in a similar way. I almost made my last line
sees someone she likes.
I like your last line a lot. pickled snarfles
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Old 02-23-2006, 12:00 AM   #3
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window shopping transient
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Hello, I loved the imagery from this one; and I can't resist the tempation. As the Pen does, so shall I:

anemic complexion from
shunning too many stares,
prefers anonymity

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Old 02-23-2006, 12:06 PM   #5
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woo! thanks for the lovely and excellent haikus with this one pen and eleda. it's a joy to have them around.

i love the word, scrag, pen! thanks for reminding me.

great use of anemic, eleda and your last line is wonderful!

j.r.- yeah, i think we did. and today's seems similar as well. get out of my head! fickle swabs
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