Writers Forum - WritingForums.com Home Rules FAQ Members Groups Calendar Gallery Search
» Sign Up «

Welcome to Writing Forums, one of the fastest growing writing communties on the web.

You are currently viewing our boards as a guest which gives you limited access to view most discussions, articles and photo galleries. By joining our free community you will be able to talk with other writers, get feedback on your work to improve your writing skills, discuss ideas, share tips & tricks, network and make friends!

Registration is fast, simple and absolutely free so please, join our community today!

If you have any problems with the registration process or your account login, please contact support.
  Search Forums
Lit.Org - Bootcamp for writers. Post your work and other writers review it, it's that easy.

Advanced Search



Go Back   Writers Forum - WritingForums.com > Creativity > Poetry
Register FAQ Members List Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

Reply
 
Thread Tools
Old 02-22-2006, 03:17 PM   #1
Prolific Writer
 
writerprincess15's Avatar
 
Join Date: Oct 2004
Location: In the worlds of my stories, poems, and songs :)
Gender: Female
Posts: 299
writerprincess15
untitled; 104 words

I can't stop thinking about him

I can't stop caring

And I don't know why



I know he'll never notice

I know he'll never care

And it makes me want to cry



He's all I ever think about

He's all I really want

And I just can't understand why



I know I'll never be what he wants

I know I'll never be good enough

And it hurts so much I really want to cry



I know I should forget about him; forget I ever cared

But I just cant let him go; get him off my mind

And I really need to know.....why?
__________________
"Its better to be hated for who you are then to be loved for who you're not."

"I honestly think it is better to be a failure at something you love then to be a winner at something you hate."
writerprincess15 is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 02-22-2006, 03:40 PM   #2
Wordsmith
 
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Sailing the darkness of the Cosmos with this planet as my vessel
Gender: Male
Posts: 5,470
Oasis Writer
Send a message via ICQ to Oasis Writer Send a message via AIM to Oasis Writer Send a message via MSN to Oasis Writer Send a message via Yahoo to Oasis Writer
Very impressive poem Ter. A deep emotion that can be related worldwide. A feeling, that I myself have felt recently as well. Very good work. Very impressive.
__________________
Come Join Us At Writer's Beat
Oasis Writer is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply


Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 
Thread Tools

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are Off
Pingbacks are Off
Refbacks are Off


All times are GMT -5. The time now is 12:34 AM.
Powered by vBulletin, Copyright ©2000-2007, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
LinkBacks Enabled by vBSEO 3.1.0


 
You are NOT Logged In.
User Name:

Password



Newsletter

Subscribe to Majestic
the official newsletter of Writing Forums and lit.org
Email:


Related Links

Link to Us:
Writing Forums - Discussions for Writers