xCharlottexShadowsx

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the person i used to be is gone
do you care?
i doubt it
no one would love someone like me
im gone and no one cares
i wont come back
except as a ghost of the past
a broken spirit
never again to be seen

slayerofangels

I'm not sure I like the way each line is capitalised, though that's a personal thing, and I think some punctuation would go well with this piece. Still, those are only small things, and I have to say, I like the sentiment in this poem enough that I could overlook them. Thanks for sharing!

Sureia

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For Sale: One soul. Mint condition, never been used.

Battle not with monsters lest ye become a monster. And if you gaze into the abyss, the abyss gazes also into you. - Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

Psycho6058

Been there, done that, I appreciate the frustration, you gotta get cable. Nicely put into verse. Welcome to the forum.

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All that is necessary for the forces of evil to win the world is for enough good men to do nothing...Edmund Burke