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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 02-20-2006, 08:44 PM   #1
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Dying Art

it's evident,
the bond of a futile lust
faltering at a knifes edge

gradually pushing further,
devouring myself into you
like ragged breath's poison

words tearing flesh,
slowly dripping my sin
gently upon your enticing body

beating heart's turning,
solemnly growing lush
encased in an immense bliss

exploring new horizons,
turning crimson tide
into marvelous dying art

as sullen lips,
lain against shattered fate
lost in present darkness

like trembling fingertips,
seeking tender warmth in dark red
now cascading from within flesh.
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Old 02-20-2006, 11:38 PM   #2
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Old 02-21-2006, 01:17 AM   #3
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