srhalfwaythere

It's a mystery to me
How the love I feel for you
You cannot see

How the first sight of you
Shocked my heart like no one else

I'd give anything to have
Just one night with you
One night to show how I feel

I mean nothing big by that
Just to feed you some dinner
And enjoy a single moment in your presence

I'd shower you with flowers
If I knew what kind you liked

I'd pick you up from dance
If I was given the chance

I'd adopt your apathy of meat
If I could be as kind-hearted as you

I'd make every moment count
If I could just be with you

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Sean Riordan

"Being half way there is enough to last a lifetime, but far enough to keep you going." - Sean Riordan

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This isn't bad, if you mean it to be a declaration of feelings. I find it to be a bit too literal, but I cannot deny the emotion of this piece. Keep writing.

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GOD HELP ME!

IT'S THE SOUND THAT MAKES ME PUNCH INFANTS! (but not ms. vodka's)