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Old 02-18-2006, 05:09 PM   #1
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wild pussy willows
curl up on threadbare branches
cats in cane cradles
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Old 02-18-2006, 08:50 PM   #2
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fuzzy gray softness
plump nuggets against my cheek
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Old 02-18-2006, 09:43 PM   #3
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mmm.

i don't believe i have commented on one of your works before. (a little intimidated, truth be told) i like this one very much. i'm not sure what it is exactly. maybe the reminder of a past warm, fall sunset.

thank you for sharing.

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Old 02-18-2006, 10:07 PM   #4
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intimidated?? huh? be like J.R.MacLean instead! I'm harmless .. honestly!
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I like the alliteration. Haiku can be hard to work sonic devices into.

I especially like how "threadbare branches" feels in ones mouth.

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Old 02-18-2006, 10:42 PM   #6
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Well thank you Frank! Pussy willows are a seasonal favourite which we could find wild where I grew up. Fascinating creatures that still make me recall the softness against my cheek as they brushed me when I carried them.

J.R.! purring songs of spring! how delicious!
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