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Old 02-18-2006, 01:46 PM   #1
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Lightbulb My Stand

My Stand:
This river
Cold and deep
All my thoughts just lurk beneath its surface
To break upon the shore
To hold all that is dear
In a rush I hear a voice
To take my stand
Or face defeat
How long will I last against myself this time?
Where will it end?
When will this vessel reach a dry place?
To listen to the cry of the animals in the night
Each singing its own song
It scares me to think
They have what I don’t
Purpose they have found.
For them its just surviving.
For me, what?
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Old 02-18-2006, 02:00 PM   #2
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Ali, I like this.
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Old 02-18-2006, 09:59 PM   #3
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The meaning of life poem. I like it. We all think about it. What is our purpose? What is our destiny? Why? How? I like it. Good work. Small-town said it all.
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