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02-18-2006, 01:41 PM
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Best Seller
Join Date: Nov 2005
Location: Catalunya, Spain
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Tantric
scorch me with your touch
so that I may feel the
rush of heat
rise up my spine,
purifying stagnant
pools of energy,
releasing something
divine.
Last edited by eleda : 02-18-2006 at 03:31 PM.
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02-18-2006, 01:47 PM
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Ink Slinger
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more more more!
egad. I thought tantra was supposed to last longer than that!
just teasing Eleda, it's very nice, though something more- lingering - was hoped for by over the top me.
cheers
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02-18-2006, 02:09 PM
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Adept Writer
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ahhh, i need to, um, uh, yeah.... 
thanks for this eleda. love it. 
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02-18-2006, 03:35 PM
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Ink Slinger
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I really like the second stanza here, as it seems to echo a sentiment that we all feel at some stage. Thanks for Sharing Eleda!
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02-18-2006, 03:37 PM
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Much appreciation to you both (JR & MJK) for reading and commenting. I did one little modification so now I think it reads better. lol
Namaste my friends!
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02-18-2006, 04:52 PM
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Best Seller
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Slayer: I appreciate you stopping by and for posting. LOL
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02-18-2006, 04:56 PM
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Wordsmith
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Have you ever been to Burning Man? 50% Tantra. Search Teflon's Bar for a wacky account. www.burningman.com |
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