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Old 02-18-2006, 10:00 AM   #1
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Fantasies and Daydreams

The shadows of the willows
on the floating lily pads
adds a soothing touch to a
picture-post-card-perfect
image of tranquility
from my rock-chair
observation post.

Cooling my feet
in mossy green water,
my bamboo fishing pole
(with no bait or hook)
dangling in front of me,
I think of how quickly
summer has passed.

Pushing my straw hat back
I look up to identify,
and name,
the clouds that slowly
drift above me
like a holiday parade.

So much for fantasies and daydreams,
I tell myself, as I button up my
flack jacket and pick up my M-16,
(which moments ago was a bamboo
fishing pole) and head back to the war.
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Old 02-18-2006, 11:58 AM   #2
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Well, first "applause, aplause"! I really felt the Huck Finn imagery and the lazy summer days passing by and then you jolt into another reality with such a bang, I wasn't expecting. This was so very good! I would love to forward this to a political forum that I belong to.
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Old 02-18-2006, 01:06 PM   #3
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Thank you eleda, I appreciate that. Feel free to forward it.
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Old 02-18-2006, 06:35 PM   #4
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By the way eleda, what's the name of the forum?
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