Psycho6058

Unremarkable was how his life had seemed.
Nothing ever worked the way that he had dreamed.
As a boy he thought he’d do some great thing.
Maybe learn to dance or maybe learn to sing.

He got out of school and got a job scaling fish,
he said it was just temporary ‘til he got his wish.
At home he’d watch his T.V. and dream of what he’d be,
He’d show them all what he could do, "You just wait and see.”

But years proved him wrong, and life just dragged on.
He forgot the saying: “nothing ventured nothing won”.
He didn’t think that he had anything worth giving.
He didn’t really die, he just stopped living.

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All that is necessary for the forces of evil to win the world is for enough good men to do nothing...Edmund Burke

silverwriter

As a boy he thought he’d do some great thing
Maybe learn to dance or maybe learn to sing " - periods. *big grin*

He forgot the saying: “nothing ventured nothing won”
He didn’t think that he had anything worth giving," - periods

oooo. i like this one. the last line just smacks you on the face. very effective.

*hugs*

jaime

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Psycho6058

Thank you jaime. By the way, miss gramatical error specialist, how come you don't capitalize the first letter in your name?

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All that is necessary for the forces of evil to win the world is for enough good men to do nothing...Edmund Burke

silverwriter

hehehe.

you know you still think i'm special.

as for my name? that's for me to know and you to wonder.

*big grin*

*hugs*

jaime

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Psycho6058

o.k , be that way

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All that is necessary for the forces of evil to win the world is for enough good men to do nothing...Edmund Burke