mjk

sunlight whispers "grow"
shines on teacher and pupils
igniting mind's eye

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"Words have no power to impress the mind with the exquisite horror of their reality." -Edgar Allan Poe
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Creative Scribblings - a collection of odds and ends

FollowingShadow

Mmmmmmm. I identify with this poem. It's good, but I think that it needs a stronger sense of catharsis (it seems a bit open-ended). Try inserting a period at the end, if you like.

-FS

J.R. MacLean

neat. you may owe me a poetic commission for the use of "whispers" so soon after the last one, but you've managed to tease a nice image and multiple meanings out of an undramatic image. good job. specious akaline hamburgers