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| Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc. |
02-14-2006, 04:24 AM
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Confession
I need to hold a woman, embrace her, and nestle in her arms. She doesn’t have to be pretty; doesn’t have to be nice. I just want the feminine touch, that special something that all women have. I need to hold, and sigh, and let that lump in my chest fly. I woke up this morning and felt lonely... that's what came out. Comments are always welcome.
MG.
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02-14-2006, 09:54 AM
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We all have it? I'll have to go looking .. maybe I left it in Spain or Crewe.
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02-14-2006, 10:07 AM
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Sure you do. You just don't know it  |
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02-14-2006, 10:12 AM
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Location: not quite sure, but i'm surrounded by blazing fire and i was a bad girl in that last life...
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 Yeah, something tells me I'm lacking that too. Must have left it in Florida over winter break...
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02-14-2006, 10:30 AM
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[complaint] It would be nice, since you bothered to reply, to spend a few more seconds and say if you liked the "poem" or not [/complaint]
Now I can go about my everyday business 
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02-14-2006, 10:34 AM
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cool poem. i sometimes feel the same. sorry if my post is lacking in critical analysis, i just have never really read poems b4. actually this is the first time since being made to in english class at school last year, so im a little new to the way poems are written and all that. so i cant say nething. but i will tell u i like it  because support is as good as critism. |
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02-14-2006, 12:11 PM
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hey! I liked the poem ... made me stop and think .. wonder too
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02-14-2006, 03:57 PM
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i know what youre going through... and for that illustrated so well in this simple and calm piece, i propose a toast 'to women!'
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