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02-13-2006, 08:20 AM
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Ink Slinger
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picking strawberries
picking strawberries
heads and swollen buds bow down
listening to Spring.
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02-13-2006, 10:23 AM
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Adept Writer
Join Date: Jan 2006
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ahh, i love "listening to spring". gives me such a feeling of freshness and renewal. spring... it's not far away! well, perhaps to you canadians it is. sorry bout that.  garbled junipers
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02-13-2006, 04:55 PM
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Ink Slinger
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mjk: spring? are you referring to our six weeks of lousy skiing? quixotic lollipops
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02-14-2006, 01:25 AM
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yeah, i really have no idea what i'm talking about. we have two seasons here... not that hot and oh my f***ing god, i'm melting.
so i guess your seasons are "hey it's not actually freezing" and "my snot is an icicle"?
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02-14-2006, 01:28 AM
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Scribe
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another great short read.
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02-14-2006, 08:13 AM
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Ink Slinger
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so i guess your seasons are "hey it's not actually freezing" and "my snot is an icicle"?
mkj: actually, the 'hey it's not actually freezing' is referred to as the Great Heat Wave of
'95.
T.R.: Thanks for coming by and commenting.
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02-14-2006, 08:37 AM
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Wordsmith
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i like strawberries.
yummy.
nice haiku, but i thought they never had puncuation (besides the occasional mid-line comma)
*hugs*
jaime
strawberry chess piece
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02-14-2006, 12:54 PM
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Ink Slinger
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Jaime: me too (strawberries and punctuation), then I looked at some old classics (haiku, not strawberries) and they were full of the stuff (punctuation, that is) so....what's good enough for Basho.. cheers and hugs.
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