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Old 02-12-2006, 10:24 AM   #1
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J.R. MacLean is on a distinguished road
warm milk

suckling tender breast
eyes full past brim with warm milk
baby floats to sleep.
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Old 02-12-2006, 10:39 AM   #2
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Penelope is an unknown quantity at this point
nursing one's nipples
pain shoots along nerve endings
tender from teething

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another stereotype shot down by one who knows
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Old 02-12-2006, 10:48 AM   #3
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Baby craves warm milk
Anxious mother dreads small teeth.
Drinking and flinching.

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Old 02-12-2006, 11:11 AM   #4
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first love, never lost
big babies are Playboy's feast
suckling till they die.

whoops, that's a wee bit nasty, eh?

pen: ouch, you make me glad that I'm a maahan..

JB: so much for warm and cozy, breastfeeding is a danger zone.
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Old 02-12-2006, 02:20 PM   #5
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j.r.- i love the image of the eyes full past brim. so nurturing and warm this one is. makes me wistful. whimpering doctors

hahaha, damn straight pen! no, i don't know from experience (thank god!) but it's easy to imagine. ouch.

jimbob- i love that, "drinking and flinching". that's great.

j.r. (again)- hahaha, but i didn't think plastic breasts gave milk. poised fishhooks
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