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Poetry Poems, Haiku & Tanka etc.

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Old 02-11-2006, 12:25 AM   #1
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dannyboy is an unknown quantity at this point
Lost Tribe of Israel. (no 2)

still diddling...

Lost Tribe of Israel.

Apple cider time,
red cheeks,
heaving pirate ships sail
The Cape of Good Hope -
fresh faced,
pimples hardly put to rest,
youthful artists drinking anything,
read Kerouac,
write important novellas,
act in avant garde plays
that attack the audience;
voices so loud
mothers hush from childhoods.

Young warriors compete
as if the Trojan War
is only days in;
feast on words,
drugs and ideas
like bees in spring’s bloom –
bright colours, scents,
kisses bruise lips or necks,
the future –
a blanket tossed casually
upon the wild grasses of lust.

Time, though,
is no feast,
it is an eraser.

Years distant
from that long haired,
bright–eyed lad -
do any of the others
stop and wonder,
smile secretly,
hide shining eyes from wife,
husband or child;
glad in a secret pool of their soul,
they dined those years
before camaraderie was lost
in the capricious sand’s of life?



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